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People often settle for good enough, but that won't cut it for me.
Everyone takes a vacation now again, yet I've never had a single one.
Regrets are usually attached to those that delay, victory goes to the restless souls.
Forfeiting time, others fall behind; efficiency brings speed through power of mind.
Endless complaints slow progress, a strong work ethic leads to success.
Carelessness creates blockades; insight opens hidden doors.
Trying isn't doing, only following through gets the job done.
Irritation is a great hindrance; inspiration aids one's endurance.
Over is a word that shouldn't exist; never-ending aspires to the greatest of all quests!
Never wish or hope, it's your actions that bring results!
This old thing has been kicking around on my hard drive for months and I just rushed it's completion. So... I wouldn't rule out a future revision. The core message is there, I just don't feel it's as elegant as it should be.
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WongZixin Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Student General Artist
This is great! :la:
"Work hard, or yer lazyness ain't ganna get yu nothin'! :iconwthplz:"
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL, so true :-)
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AnglaiseRox Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Student Photographer
Wow this is really interesting! =D
I like the wording, and it flows very nicely. It's quite interesting to speculate about the meaning and motivation behind it too.
Great work! =D
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :XD: I wonder if others will be able to catch on that it's a simple acrostic poem :-P For several years, I've been working on one that will ultimately go on my tombstone. At some point I'll be studying cryptography, because I want to hide all sorts of messages on it.
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AnglaiseRox Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Student Photographer
Wow, that's... dark :|
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not really. I'm going to leave behind messages that will make people laugh. I don't care for the whole crying thing, even if it's not me doing it :|
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AnglaiseRox Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Student Photographer
Wow :| That's really interesting! lol
I would never have thought of that... :paranoid:
I can't believe you're already planning for your death though :|
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I don't mean to plan as way to be creepy or anything. There's never a guarantee that I will live beyond today or the next day, we all live on borrowed time after all. If you die once and come back, you can't help but plan for what you leave behind when the next time will be permanent.
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AnglaiseRox Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Student Photographer
Wow, yeah.. That's so true.
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
///Random subject change///
If a tree falls in forest and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound? While logic says yes, how can we know if no one hears is... *begins to plant microphones all around the world* :evillaugh:
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